Review of “Out with a Bang (Romance on the Go)” – Sarah Marsh

Length: 51 pages – MMF
 

When Laura Harper walked into her interview for Dover and Harding Engineering, she never could have imagined how rewarding it could be to find a place for herself where her organizational skills were relied upon and needed so badly. Sure it didn’t hurt that the two men who had hired her were straight out of her wildest fantasies, but had she let her feelings go too far? Was it just wishful thinking that they might want her in return?

Greyson Harding and Barrett Dover knew the moment Laura walked into their office that they’d finally found the woman they wanted to share their lives with. So they began by hiring the sweet, shy woman and hoped they could convince her that their interest was more than a passing attraction. But after five years they’ve finally run out of time and if they aren’t careful, they could lose Laura for good.

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Grey loved the way Laura’s eyes dilated even further at his whispered words, and when she licked her lips, he couldn’t resist any longer. He closed the distance between their mouths and kissed her finally. When her lips opened on a gasp, he pushed forward and took her mouth like he’d been imagining for all these years.

It was sensual, and deep, filled with all the longing he’d been holding back. She tasted just as good as he knew she would have, like strawberries and the wine she’d had with dinner. He pulled back when Barrett let out a groan, knowing that he had to share the bounty of her soft mouth, and when he did, she moaned and tried to follow his retreat. Grey liked that. His cock was already hard enough to hurt, and the little noises of surrender coming from those sweet lips of hers made him ache even more to slide inside of her.

When Barrett leaned forward and took Laura’s mouth in a desperate kiss, Grey moved his attention to the delectable body that he’d been imagining for what felt like eternity. Laura kept herself covered up, but in those sexy skirts, Grey imagining bending her over on just about every surface in the office. Truth be told, it was significantly cutting into his productivity. He thought about fucking her three quarters of the day, and knew that Barrett did the same. Ironically, without her here to keep things running smoothly, their business would have suffered.

He ran his shaking hands down her sides, his thumbs barely grazing the hard nipples he could see through her dress. The dress he had bought her. He really liked the thought that she was wearing what he had chosen for her. He wondered though, what she’d picked to wear underneath it, and as he found the side zipper and slowly lowered it, his pulse was racing at the thought of all that creamy white skin that was now theirs for the taking. When he reached up and undid the clasp of the halter top around her neck, the dress slowly cascaded down her curvy body, revealing bright, red lace that made both men groan in appreciation.

“You’ve been hiding this sexy body from us for too long, baby,” Barrett said with a growl. “I want to touch it all. Grey, let’s see what’s ours.”


 

(review request submitted by the author for an honest critique)
 
So these two dominant males wait 5 years for Laura to make the first move knowing very well her shy nature wouldn’t allow her to do so. They love her, want her, but still have conquests while they wait for her to make said move. In chapter five, Barrett could tell by Laura’s expression she was expecting to be asked out by Grey. I’m sorry but the five-year-plan should’ve went out the window long before it did. They knew she was interested so the Doms should’ve stepped up to the plate well before chapter 9. 
 
With that said, once they realized they were losing her, the gloves came off. The Doms definitely took charge. THANK F…K!! 
 
To sum up certain pivotal chapters, I’ve named them which I think gives you as idea what’s in store before you read them. And, oh, YOU SHOULD READ THEM!
 
Chapter 11: It’s time to get down and dirty……talk!
Chapter 12: The fun’s just beginning….
Chapter 13: May I lend you a hand?
 
I could name them all but I think the ones above might’ve sparked some interest so, with that in mind, my job is now complete. 
 
Happy Reading!! 
 
 Heart Rating System – 1 (lowest) and 5 (highest) 
Score: ❤❤❤❤
 
 

 
 
 
 
 
 

Sarah Marsh is a hopeless romantic who loves a steamy twist to her plot lines and characters who will go the extra mile in order to find their happy endings.

Sarah lives in British Columbia, Canada. She’s still working a regular day job in an office, so the escape of writing and creating new worlds is the best way to relax and let go. Creating characters who can make her laugh and fall in love at the same time will always be her inspiration, and she hopes that you’ll love them just as much as she does.

Sarah currently has a science fiction romance series published with Siren Publishing, and a dark contemporary MF romance in the works with Limitless Publishing. This is year two into the writing adventure and it’s looking to be a busy one

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13 Responses to Review of “Out with a Bang (Romance on the Go)” – Sarah Marsh

  1. John

    Very sexy..can’t wait to buy!

  2. Thanks so much for the review Kam!

  3. Oh Kam, you have done it again. You keep finding great reads.Thank you for sharing this one and it is one I will Have to read. I am just trying to decide when I can get this one. It sounds fantastic.

  4. Tianna

    This sounds like a tantalizing read. But cost wise I’m just not sold. Added to my wish list so if it goes on sale I’ll grab it. Money for books isn’t top of my priorities at the moment 🙁

    • Kam Brook

      I completely understand. Many people are feeling the pinch. Thank you for visiting and commenting. 😊

    • Thanks for your interest Tianna. 🙂 I do have a few Facebook events I’m participating in this month, one for Halloween on the 28th and there’s a large Evernight Author’s event coming up this week, I’m on the 16th. There’s always lots of great prizes and free books up for grabs!

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